Persuasive writing

Purpose: persuade Mr elder whether there should be reflection or not.

Audience:  Mr elder/ Mr moore

L.G: shower control with my sentences by varying my sentence type and length.

Reflection

Should we have reflection yes or no? Well my opinion is we should have reflection for 1. Doesn't teach us kids if we don't have reflection

2. Different ideas for reflection

3. Make them think about their mistakes

Paragraph  1

Refelition if we didn't have it we would have a really bad school what just getting told off is good idea . But if we had reflection we might get put in there for a day might go back out and do it again so if we never had reflection we would get off with everything. So reflection teaches us to behave or would you rather have naughty kids in your school  or well  behaved kids my opion is well behaved kids so keeping reflection will help our school in all different ways. Some kids say yes for going into reflection and just sitting around for 20 mins.  

Paragraph 2

Changing what we do for reflection . Kids like going to reflection because they're nothing to do in the 20 min we are provided with. Maybe instead of going on reflection we could help out around our school like picking up rubbish planting new plants for our school instead of sitting around for 20 minutes we could be helping out for our environment.

Paragraph 3

Do we really want kids of our school to go back and do the same stuff again well i am 100% sure you don't want them to do that so if you think  we should change what we do for reflection instead of  staying inside for 20 minutes

Conclusion

Just think about it more challenging task not as fun reflection