Persuasive writing

Purpose: persuade Mr elder whether there should be reflection or not.

Audience:  Mr elder/ Mr moore

L.G: shower control with my sentences by varying my sentence type and length.

Reflection

Should we have reflection yes or no? Well my opinion is we should have reflection for 1. Doesn't teach us kids if we don't have reflection

2. Different ideas for reflection

3. Make them think about their mistakes

Paragraph  1

Refelition if we didn't have it we would have a really bad school what just getting told off is good idea . But if we had reflection we might get put in there for a day might go back out and do it again so if we never had reflection we would get off with everything. So reflection teaches us to behave or would you rather have naughty kids in your school  or well  behaved kids my opion is well behaved kids so keeping reflection will help our school in all different ways. Some kids say yes for going into reflection and just sitting around for 20 mins.  

Paragraph 2

Changing what we do for reflection . Kids like going to reflection because they're nothing to do in the 20 min we are provided with. Maybe instead of going on reflection we could help out around our school like picking up rubbish planting new plants for our school instead of sitting around for 20 minutes we could be helping out for our environment.

Paragraph 3

Do we really want kids of our school to go back and do the same stuff again well i am 100% sure you don't want them to do that so if you think  we should change what we do for reflection instead of  staying inside for 20 minutes

Conclusion

Just think about it more challenging task not as fun reflection

Build a business

For build a business we were selling Oobleck and stress balls for the following report you will see how we found the process, how successful market nights was, profit and payback loan and what would we change or improve.

I found leading up to market night was fun but hard. My partner for build a business as jaymie. We thought we had finished our booklet but we had forgotten 1 thing which was our budget and how much one product cost.

For build a business we were not really successful but we tried our hardest . We always had a chance to change our product to be more successful . Our profit was around $10. We payed back our loan with just enough  profit left.

I would change our product to something bigger. I Say that for build a business we should make something like food or are woulsell better. I would improve my stall and try make it stand out so everyone would want to come see it.

Build a business was very fun for me for our last build a business. We made $25 worth of orders. I Hope next time I'll change my product to something bigger.

                                                          oobleck and stress balls 

Information writing -Explain something

Purpose: create a procedural piece for your build a business product

Lg: Clear intro and conclusion

S.O.S Use precise verbs. (doing word) eg pour, blend

Stress balls is a way to relieve stress all you do is squeeze the stress balls

Stress Balls:

1. Begin with 2 balloons  cut a hole into the first balloon and with the second balloon add flour and a little bit of water.
2. Place the 1 balloon around the 2 balloon and tie them both together.
3. Make sure you leave it to set so it goes firm

Firstly Oobleck can be used for many ages and sizes Oobleck can be used for kindy and caregivers. Oobleck is like gloo but easy to play with for children. Oobleck is hard when you put pressure on it  and runny when you let it go.

1. Pour ¼ cup of corn flour into the bowl.
2. GEt 2 tablespoons of water blend into the cornflour.
3. Mix into you can put pressure onto it and it’s hard when you let it go it’s runny.

If you follow both of these you will make wonderful products.