Thursday, June 18, 2015

world war 1

world war

One big breath, sweating, running fast. I can feel my heart moving, commander commander “ stop I already know what to say, I reconsider “ “yes thank you” “now go on tell the rest before you miss out “ patter patter “I'm almost out of breath”  just keep  running ring ring “ hello go on said commander “ “OK” lets go men  were  Australia's western men fearless we may see dead bodies but we can feel sweat were going to win this go on men  (whistle sound) bang bang “ nooooo”  I feel sweat running down my face   bang crash I can smell the gunpowder gun powder.

the end
written by tegan

Thursday, June 11, 2015

haunted house

haunted house      

The dark swaying house shivers in the night blinded by the lights never glitters in the day darkens and kreaps in the night you can wake it but i wouldn't dare too many scary ghost wonder in the shadow of the house the windows bang with no wind. The wonders of the ghosts still wonder around this town waiting to haunt people with presser. The town wanted to get the ghosts  once and for all they had a vote and frank had to get the ghost 6 weeks later frank came back they no more ghosts he screams.

The End
written by tegan