Thursday, June 18, 2015

world war 1

world war

One big breath, sweating, running fast. I can feel my heart moving, commander commander “ stop I already know what to say, I reconsider “ “yes thank you” “now go on tell the rest before you miss out “ patter patter “I'm almost out of breath”  just keep  running ring ring “ hello go on said commander “ “OK” lets go men  were  Australia's western men fearless we may see dead bodies but we can feel sweat were going to win this go on men  (whistle sound) bang bang “ nooooo”  I feel sweat running down my face   bang crash I can smell the gunpowder gun powder.

the end
written by tegan

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