Vote for our current flag

To our wonderful year 7& 8 teacher (sort of ) my writing today is about 3 statements first i will be talking about our history second will be on how much money we are wasting on the new flag  last but not least changing ever little flag in nz.

Primarily, the current flag has a lot of history behind it. One of the biggest history is all our soldiers that died 4 us in ww1 & ww2 to save our country. Think of all the kids that thought their dad was coming home and then their mum telling them dad's not coming back. Those are pretty brave people.

Furthermore the current flag is way too much money  for our tiny country yep we all know he takes a lot of money out of our account for taxes now here is a question for u do u think our country needs a new flag yes or no.

In addition we end up having to change our passports and parents have to change their driver's licence. If we change the flag we have to change ever little flag in nz.

Concluding i think we should keep our current flag for multiple reasons mostly because our soldiers died under that flag.

 Im Frozen

L.g : stay in the present tense when describing your senses in a moment of time

Sos: describe senses see, hear, smell, touch, taste.

At least 3 adjectives

Use at least 3 adverbs

Stay in the present tense

As the cold snow falls  above me I hear a small crack as a small brunch fell down onto the white fluffy snow. As i slowly move my hand onto the cold snow all I can think about is my taste of my hot chocolate when I Reach my house that's if i ever get there .I hear big footsteps come closer I see someone I think i'm losing my mind “hello hello” they say I feel something  warm go around me I touch the soft fabric as it continues to wrap around me I start to walk with this I still don’t know who he/she is.  I  tried sniffing all i smell is fresh air.  I’m at the bottom again.

LG Describe your senses in detail though descriptive language and elaboration.
S.O.S Describe senses -see, hear ,smell, touch, taste
-use at least 3 adjectives
-use at least 3 adverbs
-elaborate on each sense with an extensive

 Walking into the cowshed turning on all the machinery. As the young cows come quickly into the yards . We come to the end of the first small herd the cows are going really slowly. As we come to the 2nd herd of cows this is the one where the bulls are in .It takes a long time to get to the end but finally we finished with only the bulls left as i forget about the bulls i go up to  the gate i hear stomping like a big herd of of elephants and one bull sees me and comes flying at me as my dad pulls me away! as we clean the yards my gumboots touch the slimy poop like im ice skating the smell is so bad i can almost taste the smell of cows. As we finish cleaning We get on our motorbikes and head home.

LG: Describe my senses during a specific moment
SOS: 

• Describe each of my senses See,hear,touch,smell,taste
• vary sentence starters
• similes

As I stand under my umbrella I feel a flood over my head. My eyes capture the light blue water floating down the street. I taste my cigarette as the smoke disappears in the cold winter night. The sound of the rain is like a big herd of animals.