Thursday, March 17, 2016

 Im Frozen
L.g : stay in the present tense when describing your senses in a moment of time
Sos: describe senses see, hear, smell, touch, taste.
At least 3 adjectives
Use at least 3 adverbs
Stay in the present tense

As the cold snow falls  above me I hear a small crack as a small brunch fell down onto the white fluffy snow. As i slowly move my hand onto the cold snow all I can think about is my taste of my hot chocolate when I Reach my house that's if i ever get there .I hear big footsteps come closer I see someone I think i'm losing my mind “hello hello” they say I feel something  warm go around me I touch the soft fabric as it continues to wrap around me I start to walk with this I still don’t know who he/she is.  I  tried sniffing all i smell is fresh air.  I’m at the bottom again.

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