Purpose: create a piece of writing to prove you have met your learning goal.

Lg: write mostly correct sentences that are beginning to show variety.

S.O.S: minimum 1 page, paragraph

Firstly there are 3 people named tegan , charlotte and jaymie. They were all playing happily when Jaymie kicked the ball to hard. She  kicked it onto old man frankie's lawn. They played paper scissors rock out they all lost dun dun dun.

They started walking over to the lawn when the door open as they fill down the the thought of the house into what they thought was the heart.

My mum told me not to come here Jaymie said. So did charlotte and tegan said. As they think they're walking down the hallway they find a cage with a big padlock that says don't open as they spot the ball.

In the end they found the ball and tried to find their way out. Once they thought they were free of everything when old man frankie pop out of nowhere.

The festival of lights

The festival of lights has been running for over 23 years. The festival of lights is located in new plymouth at pukera park. They have many sponsor such as TSB BANK, The lion foundation and many many more. They also have over 100,000 visitors each year.

The festival of lights has over 45 national and international acts each season. They are on late december through to early february millions of people come from all over new zealand  to see the festival of lights all lite up and the music plays beautiful for everyone ears  

Each summer the TSB BANK festival of lights transforms pukekura park onog new zealand's premier botanical gardens into a magical illuminated nighttime wonderland of multi coloured lights gleaming amongst the trees. Colorful lights are used to highlight tree crowns,frens and other plants.Light art displays are installed along the festival walking route and the waterfall is lit with changing colors.