Purpose: create a piece of writing to prove you have met your learning goal.

Lg: write mostly correct sentences that are beginning to show variety.

S.O.S: minimum 1 page, paragraph

Firstly there are 3 people named tegan , charlotte and jaymie. They were all playing happily when Jaymie kicked the ball to hard. She  kicked it onto old man frankie's lawn. They played paper scissors rock out they all lost dun dun dun.

They started walking over to the lawn when the door open as they fill down the the thought of the house into what they thought was the heart.

My mum told me not to come here Jaymie said. So did charlotte and tegan said. As they think they're walking down the hallway they find a cage with a big padlock that says don't open as they spot the ball.

In the end they found the ball and tried to find their way out. Once they thought they were free of everything when old man frankie pop out of nowhere.